Had the immortalized voice of John Lennon not been so compelling, I may not have remembered the moment. But how could I not, with thousands of voices blended in unison inside a square . . . that wasn’t really square. Besides, some outside the square were singing too if I recall. As those thousands in harmony forgot me but recanted, “Remember all the people . . . ,” I also recall the precise depth the steel reached–or maybe it was a letter opener . . . or a pick. My vision had blurred; but yeah, I’m thinking now, the song ended on an ice pick. Though I never actually saw my life’s intruder coming, a definite pang raced through me as the tip of whatever blade scraped a rib. And I remember seeing my pursuer mouth words to the song but can’t for the life of me recall his voice . “Living . . . .” I joined him in unison as his upper lip quirked a smidgen higher to one side and he grinned. Funny what one does remember.
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Okay, maybe a bit morbid, but I write them as they come. Watching the ball drop last night, this inspiration took hold. Whether or not it becomes anything more is anyone’s guess. However, if you missed my New Year’s Eve free read and need something more on the sunny-side, here’s a little brightness, just for you: http://bryltyne.com/2009/12/free-holiday-read
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| Enjoy, |
| Bryl |





January 1st, 2010 at 5:37 am
[Blog] Friday Flash Fiction – Remember: Remember by Bryl R. Tyne
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January 1st, 2010 at 8:16 am
Well, there’s something that’s for sure, but if you wait for inspiration to hit you you might be waiting a long, long time. Better to go after it and the hell with what they say about it. At least you’ll have a bad story where before you had none.
Happy New Year! Is that what will become of us, scribbling nonsense so early in the way? I can’t think of a better way to live…
Mick
http://www.mykoladementiuk.com
January 1st, 2010 at 8:36 am
I like the flash fiction and I hope something more comes of it because I am intrigued.
Happy New Year!
January 1st, 2010 at 10:56 am
Well done, Bryl! Yes, it’s a bit macabre but there’s no law that says you can’t write what pops into your head. Not yet anyway, I’m sure there’s a politician trying to figure out how to legislate that somewhere, LOL. In the meantime, write it!
January 1st, 2010 at 1:05 pm
I just loved it, Bryl. It’s so rare to find a writer who has the courage to write first person and the talent to make it work.
Glenn